I give this one an 8. It seems to me that it is a good illustration of the title, but nothing changes from the first slide to the last.
The story makes me feel a little whimsical. I almost want someone to fall. :)
I give this story a 10. It is obvious your characters are very brave in dealing with the perils of the escalator!
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I give this one an 8. It seems to me that it is a good illustration of the title, but nothing changes from the first slide to the last.
The story makes me feel a little whimsical. I almost want someone to fall. :)
I give this story a 10. It is obvious your characters are very brave in dealing with the perils of the escalator!
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